tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5611454060430053710.comments2014-01-30T17:41:42.048-08:00Tales from New FriscoAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13335113318266098786noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5611454060430053710.post-13935939686675581182013-08-14T13:21:42.320-07:002013-08-14T13:21:42.320-07:00I enjoyed your writing style throughout the story,...I enjoyed your writing style throughout the story, especially in the beginning. The tension that you established in the first few paragraphs (with Selena running her hand over her stomach) made me want to keep reading. Cody Romanohttp://www.codyromano.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5611454060430053710.post-34625174243030403082012-08-05T10:16:15.283-07:002012-08-05T10:16:15.283-07:00Started a little slow then built to something that...Started a little slow then built to something that sustained my interest and aroused my curiosity.Andrewnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5611454060430053710.post-92171949421304148512012-04-30T12:43:43.148-07:002012-04-30T12:43:43.148-07:00Nice, love that you screwed your main character ri...Nice, love that you screwed your main character right away :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5611454060430053710.post-56551013912668460302012-04-04T22:12:37.779-07:002012-04-04T22:12:37.779-07:00Interludy goodness.Interludy goodness.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5611454060430053710.post-37522050156827134122012-03-24T18:05:28.722-07:002012-03-24T18:05:28.722-07:00Cool storyCool storyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5611454060430053710.post-82073606763270699112012-03-10T21:23:50.619-08:002012-03-10T21:23:50.619-08:00write mas rapido, i'll try to read slowerwrite mas rapido, i'll try to read slowerAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5611454060430053710.post-38929986721636910022012-03-10T21:19:34.539-08:002012-03-10T21:19:34.539-08:00now what am i going to donow what am i going to doAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5611454060430053710.post-21605533930711723812012-03-10T21:10:23.126-08:002012-03-10T21:10:23.126-08:00i'm enjoying thisi'm enjoying thisAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5611454060430053710.post-78467465837946218522012-03-10T21:00:29.205-08:002012-03-10T21:00:29.205-08:00not gross but engrossingnot gross but engrossingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5611454060430053710.post-24887860278453574812012-03-10T20:45:02.897-08:002012-03-10T20:45:02.897-08:00okay, you seem to have my attentionokay, you seem to have my attentionAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5611454060430053710.post-43962026604545814202012-03-10T20:28:28.832-08:002012-03-10T20:28:28.832-08:00nice startnice startAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5611454060430053710.post-607198343770683952012-03-03T18:09:40.676-08:002012-03-03T18:09:40.676-08:00I am enjoying your story. Looking forward to the ...I am enjoying your story. Looking forward to the next chapter. I hope he finds Alice.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5611454060430053710.post-14224320751954168692012-03-03T11:37:05.814-08:002012-03-03T11:37:05.814-08:00A pile of rats. That's gross. Nice work.A pile of rats. That's gross. Nice work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5611454060430053710.post-66006800401436104992012-03-03T05:36:29.203-08:002012-03-03T05:36:29.203-08:00Very good start to this story. Interested to read ...Very good start to this story. Interested to read more.Rebeccanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5611454060430053710.post-36510834002009105222012-03-01T21:05:59.070-08:002012-03-01T21:05:59.070-08:00Cool story. It reads fast. Can't what for more...Cool story. It reads fast. Can't what for more.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com